Tuesday, January 21, 2014

cecilia




My partner ,Maria, a 44 year old married woman who  lives with her husband and works as
factory work and speaks Spanish,the language of her country,Peru,which is on the continent of America,and 


Cecilia, this is a good start. Let me make some suggestions.

Punctuation: There should be a space after commas (,) and periods (.) but not space before.

incorrect: Spanish,the language

incorrect: Spanish ,the language

incorrect: Spanish , the language

correct: Spanish, the language

That is a minor, mechanical problem, but it's a good idea to use the correct punctuation. 


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