Monday, January 20, 2014

Sonia

My partner, Taher, a 40 year old married man who lives with his family, works  as  a Store Seller and speaks Banglaid, the language of his country, Banglades, which is on the continent of Asia, and of his hometown, Daka, which has a population of one million. He has been in New York for six months and feels happy here.


Nice work, Sonia.

Let me make a few suggestions


1. The name of a job should not have capital letters ("store seller" is corrrect; "store salesperson" is also correct.

2. Check spelling (with A,B,C in the menu above). The language is "Bengali" and the country is "Bangladesh." The spelling of the capital is Dhaka.

Your verbs are all correct. That's great.













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