Esau Agudelo

My partner, Sandra, a 36 year old marriage women who lives with her family and work as baby sister and speaks Spanish, the language of her country, Ecuador, which is on the continent of America, and of her hometown, Quito, which has a population of two million, she has been in New york for 6 months and feels a little sad because here.


Esau, this is good, but let me recommend a few changes.


1. "Women" is plural. The singular is "woman."

2. When you write or talk about "he, she or it" in the present tense, there should be "s" at the end of the verbs ("works" is correct. You only missed that one. All the others are okay).

3. "baby sister" is incorrect. The name of the job is "babysitter." It's easy to confuse the two.

4. There should be a period (,) after "million" and "she" should have a capital "S" to start a new sentence ("...million. She has been...")

5. I think the last sentence isn't complete. We didn't have enough time to finish it.

All in all, good work.