Taher

My partner,Sonia a 33 year old single woman who lives with roommate and works as a barmaid and speaks Spanish the language of her country,Colombia, which is on south America and of her hometown Cali which has a population of one million. She has been in  New York for  six months and feels happy here.


Taher, this is good.

I see only two errors.

1. The preposition before South America is "in."

2. "Cali" should be between commas  ("hometown, Cali, which has a ..").

One more:  South America is the name of a continent,  soboth South and America should begin with a capital letter.

I found another:  There should be an article ("a") before "roommate ("lives with a roommate") is correct.