Pedro's Story

My brother  and I were in the story. 

The story happened in New York. 

My brother and I had a problem with the trains . 

It happened when we were heading towards apartment in America. 

My brother  and I felt sad.

Pedro, 

Your story arrived here by a circuitous route. 

It has just one error. It's missing a possessive pronoun, "our." 

The correct sentence is: "It happened when we were heading towards OUR apartment in America."

Thanks for your contribution!