for Kaoutar

 Kaoutar,

 Thank you for your introduction to Sara.  I have written it again with some changes. Please take a look and see the differences from the original.In fact, there are only two changes, capital letters. The rest of your writing was correct.

from the teacher:

Hello,

I would like to introduce you to Sara. She is 24 years old and comes from Algiers, Algeria. She arrived in New York 6 months ago. She found  that  New york is an amazing city .
She  decided to study English now, because she wants to improve her English, and she wants to study nursing.She lives with her husband ,and she doesn't have a job for now.

 

original:

Hello,

I would like to introduce you to Sara. She is 24 years old and comes from Algiers, ALGERIA. She arrived in New York 6 months ago. She found  that  New york is an amazing city .
She  decided to study English now, because she wants to improve her english, and she wants to study nursing.She lives with her husband ,and she doesn't have a job for now.