For Pongsakorn (Nut)

 Nut, thanks for posting your introduction to your classmate. I have read it and written it again with some changes. Please take a look and see the differences. 

from the teacher:

Her name is Viviana. She was married. (or: She is married. If she was married, she is single now.

She arrived in N.Y. 1year and a half ago. She lives with her husband, and she lives in Astoria, Queens.

She comes from Ecuador.


She doesn't work in New York.

She needs to learn English because she wants to work in the United Nations.

She is very friendly and smiles always

 

Original:

She name is Vivina.She was married.
She arrived in NY 1year and half ,she lives with her husband ,and She lives in Astoria,Queens
She comes from Ecuador.
She doesn't work in New York.
She needs to learn English because she wants to work in United Nations.
She is very friendly and smile always