Wednesday, April 10, 2013

for AiQing Liang

 Thanks for writing this introduction to SaSa. 

These are some changes (corrections) to your writing. 


from the teacher:

Her name is SaSa.
She has been here one week.
She is from Taiwan.
She has job in Taiwan was selling LEDs.
She came here for vacation and learning English.
She likes to go outside(like Central Park, Times Square, etc.)

 

Original

Her name is SaSa.
She has been here one weeks.
She is from Taiwan.
She has job in Taiwan,sell LED.
She come here for vacation and learning English.
She likes to go outside(like Central park Time square...ect )

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