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I would like to introduce you to Karen.  She is 24 years old and she comes from Bogotá, Colombia.  She has been living here for 4 months.  She decided to study English because she needs to take the TOEFL test.  She graduated in business administration in Colombia. She only wants to learn  good English, to take her test and come back to her country.  She is not working; she only is studying.  Her hobbies are playing tennis and swimming.

Original:

I would like to introduce you to Karen.  She is 24 years old and she comes from Bogotá, Colombia.  She has been living here 4 mounth.  She decided to study english because she needs to take TOEFL test.  She graduated in business administration in colombia. She only wants to learn a good english, to take her test and come back to her country.  She is not working, she only is studing.  Her hubbies are playing tennis and swimming.