for Fernando

Fernando,

Thanks for introducing us to Elvire. I've made some changes to the original, fixing some grammar and punctuation. Please look and see the differences.

from the teacher

I would like to introduce my partner                                                                                          

Her name is Elvire. She comes from the Ivory Coast. She is very young, and she has been in New York one month,  so she misses her country.

She decided to study English because she would like  to have a professional title, like a business woman, and in the future get a good job in a big company .
She  does not have a job for now because she is focused on learning English.
She has never worked so she cannot change  her job in the future .
She is new in this country, so she cannot tell too much if she likes or dislikes New York.

Original

I would like to introduce my partner                                                                                          

Her name is Elvire she comes from Ivory Coast ,she is very young and she has been in New York one month  so she misses her country .
She decided to study english because she would like  to have profesional title like a business and the future she get a good job on a big company .
She  does not have a job for now because she is focus in learn english .
She never work so she can not change  the job in future .
She is new in this country so she can not tell to much if she likes or dislikes New York