Wednesday, April 10, 2013

for Viviana

Viviana, thanks for writing and putting on the blog your introduction to Nut. I have written it again with some changes in grammar and punctuation. You should look and see the differences between the teacher's version and the original.

from the teacher:

His name is Pongsakorn, but he prefers "Nut".
Nut arrived in N.Y. 8 months ago and lives with his parents, cousin and aunt in Elmhurst, Queens.
He misses Thailand because it is quiet.  Nut said that in N.Y.  life is fast.
In the future Nut will be a Computer Engineer,. His dream is to study at  City Tech in Brooklyn.
Now he doesn't work, only studies English.
He was my first friend in LaGuardia.
Nut is friendly and a good boy.

Original

His name is Pongsakorn, but he preffer "Nut".
Nut arrived at NY 8 months ago, live with his parents, cousin and aunt in Elmhurst, Queens.
He missing Thailand, because is quiet, Nut said that in NY the life is fast.
In the future will be a Computer Engineer, your dream is study in CityTECH in Brooklyn.
Now he don't work only study English.
He was my first friend in LAGUARDIA.
Nut is friendly and a good boy.

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