for Didimo
Didimo, thanks for your succinct introduction to your classmate Chanwoong. I have written it a second time below. You should look at my writing and compare it to the original. The only problem was punctuation (periods and capital letters).
from the teacher:
My name is Didimo. I would like to introduce you to Woong. He is a nice guy that comes from Korea. He likes New York and thinks that this city is very interesting. He lives in Queens and takes the 7 train everyday to come to the school. He wants learn English very well because wants to be a graphic designer.
Original:
My name is Didimo i would like to introduce you to Woong he is a nice guy that comes from korea he likes new york and thinks that this city is very interesting he lives in queens takes the 7 train everyday to came to the school he wants learn english very well because wants to be a graphic designer.
from the teacher:
My name is Didimo. I would like to introduce you to Woong. He is a nice guy that comes from Korea. He likes New York and thinks that this city is very interesting. He lives in Queens and takes the 7 train everyday to come to the school. He wants learn English very well because wants to be a graphic designer.
Original:
My name is Didimo i would like to introduce you to Woong he is a nice guy that comes from korea he likes new york and thinks that this city is very interesting he lives in queens takes the 7 train everyday to came to the school he wants learn english very well because wants to be a graphic designer.
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