My name is Sanghyeon Lee. I arrived last year 8th december in NY. I like NY becouse I like many people who are living in NY. I like to go to Manhattan becouse there is very interesting. i think Manhattan is the best and I like there. there has fashion, has many people and has Centrel park.
Her name is Rosaura. She arrived ten years ago to NY. She liked NY. She thinks NY is a stress city. She likes the Mall, Central Park and time square.
Her name is Rosaura. She arrived ten years ago to NY. She liked NY. She thinks NY is a stress city. She likes the Mall, Central Park and time square.
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Sanhyeon and Rosaura,
I appreciated your comments and your contribution throughout the semester.
This is correction of your writing:
My name is Sanghyeon Lee. I arrived in New York last year on December 8th. I like N.Y. becouse I like many people who are living in N.Y.. I like to go to Manhattan because it is very interesting there. i think Manhattan is the best and I like it there. It has fashion, has many people and has Central park.
Her name is Rosaura. She arrived in N.Y. ten years ago. She liked N.Y. She thinks NY is a stressful city. She likes the Mall, Central Park and Times Square.
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