murat and jiwon Newyork
hi,
Jiwon: I came to New York nine months ago. I like New York ,and i want to live in New York. I think, my best things is beer in the New York. My favorite place is Central park.
Murat: I came to New York six months ago. First time, I like New York ,but i dont like New York now. I want to come back in Turkey. I think so , my best thing is State of Liberty in the New York. My favorite place
is Central Park.
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Jiwon and Murat,
Thanks for writing- and for your hard work this semester.
This is your writing with some corrections:
hi,
Jiwon: I came to New York nine months ago. I like New York,and I want to live in New York. I think, my best thing is beer in the New York. My favorite place is Central park.
Murat: I came to New York six months ago. At first, I liked New York, but I don't like New York now. I want to come back in Turkey. I think my best thing in New York is the Statue of Liberty. My favorite place
is Central Park.
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