Questions about my partner:
His name is Ali, what he does in New York is working and looking for a better life. rigth now he is working in a restaurant , he doesn't like to read, the time when he used to read was when he was a teenage.
He prefer to read non-fiction, now he is interested in spotrs soccer. He likes to read the news from his country on-line . He likes New York and his educations plans are improve his Inglish. Also he likes to trabel.
ATTEMPT;
Lina Carrasquilla
His name is Ali, what he does in New York is working and looking for a better life. rigth now he is working in a restaurant , he doesn't like to read, the time when he used to read was when he was a teenage.
He prefer to read non-fiction, now he is interested in spotrs soccer. He likes to read the news from his country on-line . He likes New York and his educations plans are improve his Inglish. Also he likes to trabel.
ATTEMPT;
Lina Carrasquilla
posted by the blog at 10:50 PM
1 Comments:
Lina, thank you for writing about your partner and classmate, Ali. This is the corrected version of your writing. Please take a look and compare it with the original:
His name is Ali. What he does in New York is working and looking for a better life. Right now he is working in a restaurant.
He doesn't like to read. The time when he used to read was when he was a teenage.
He prefers to read non-fiction. Now he is interested in sports, soccer in particular. He likes to read the news from his country on-line . He likes New York and his educational plan is to improve his English. Also, he likes to travel.
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