Friday, January 20, 2012

Introduce my parther Ga In


Hello, 

I wanna introduce you my partner, her name is Ga In and she is from Korea. She's studying English for the TOEFL text and them she's interested in have a college degree in Business. She wants get a nails license too, because she is working right now in Manhattan doing that. In her future she plans to work in a business area.

 She like read, but now she don't do it to often like whem she was teenager. She preferred read more non-fiction books, but she said that when it comes to books, she is not too picky.

Ga in is interested in music and arts too, because she like watch movies. Sometime she read on-line some social network, like facebook and some news in English language.

She like New York. Her plans about education are getting better in English class, go to college and then return to her country for work.


Sign by:

Yudelfy Ureña

2 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Thanks for writing about Ga In, Yudelfy.

This is the correction of your writing. Please look at the differences from the original:

I want to introduce you to my partner, whose name is Ga In and who is from Korea. She's studying English for the TOEFL text and then she's interested in having a college degree in Business. She wants to get a nails license too, because she is working right now in Manhattan doing that. In her future she plans to work in a business area.

She likes to read, but now she doesn't do it as often as when she was a teenager. She preferred to read more non-fiction books, but she said that when it comes to books, she is not too picky.

Ga In is interested in music and arts too, because she like watching movies. Sometime she reads on-line at some social network sites, like facebook and some news in English language.

She like New York. Her plans about education are to get better in English class, go to college and then return to her country for work.

Fri Jan 20, 07:09:00 PM  
Blogger the blog said...

That was a good description to introduce to Ga
is good read about my classmate, in the reading, i found others classmate´s of Korea, its good, they can tell us more, about your country and your culture.
What kind of music do like to Ga ?
There some book of non-fiction recommended by Ga?

Thanks, Juan Perez

Sat Jan 21, 08:23:00 PM  

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