ESTEFANIA

My partner, Cristina, a 55 year old married woman who lives with her husband and her son works as a babysitter, and speaks Spanish, the language of her country, Paraguay, which is on the continent of America, and her hometown, Asuncion, which has a population of one million. She has been in New York for 15 years and feels happy here.


Estefania, this is fine.

I found just one error. I think you can find it too. It is at the end. Because this is "3rd person singular present tense," the verbs need to end with "S." Only one does not. It is near the end.