Ivonne Ecuador \ Luisa Colombia \ Alberto Peru \ Pedro Ecuador

Names:

Ivonne  Ecuador  Pedro Ecuador
Luisa   Colombia
Alberto   Peru


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Overall, the best country to be a women is Iceland.
the worst country to be a women is 25 , 34 and 80 respectively. The USA is 23.

-Excellent, Pedro. You should remember to start the second sentence with a capital letter. 


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when it comes to health the best countries to be a woman are Hauritania, Mexico and France.

the worst is India or countries are 55 , 34 and 109 respectively. The USA is number 33.


-Good again. Remember to start each sentence with a capital letter. 


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when it comes to education he best countries to be a woman are  USA
the worst is Benin or countries are 52 , 45 and 88 respectively. The USA is number 1.


-Again, capital letters are necessary to start sentences. Also, there should be a comma (,) after "education.

(When it comes to education, the best country to be a woman IS the U.S.A.



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when it comes to Economics he best countries to be a woman are  Norway
the worst is Siria or countries are 90 , 39 and 88 respectively. The USA is number 6.

-Remember: "are" is plural. You named only one country, Norway, so the sentence is singular and should have "is." (The best COUNTRY to be a woman IS Norway). 


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when it comes to Politics he best countries to be a woman are  Iceland ,  Argentina
the worst is Siria or countries are 17 , 65 and 69  respectively. The USA is number 60.

-Overall, the writing is correct, Pedro. You should watch punctuation (capital letters and periods especially).