for Yesenia and Robert

Yesenia & Robert, 

This is the correction of your writing about Obama. You should look at it and notice the differences from the original. In fact, there were very few errors.

from the teacher:

Barack Obama was born on August 4, 1961 in Hawaii. His parents divorced and his mother married again.
He has 2 children.  He is the 44 th President of the United States. He is married with Michelle Obama.  In 2004, he was elected as a U.S Senator. He won the Nobel Peace prize. His familly moved to Indonesia in 1967.

the original:

Barack Obama was born in August 4 1961 in Hawaii. His parents divorced and his mother married again.
He has 2 children.  He is the 44 th President of the United States. He is married with Michelle Obama.  In 2004 was elected as a U.S Senator. He won the Nobel Peace prize. His familly moved to Indonesia in 1967.