for Jomairy, Laura and Nut.
The work of your group shows that if you read a second time you can correct it yourself. There are few errors.
The story about Jomairy is perfect.
The story about Laura has one error. The correct sentence is "Now, she needs to have a job of some kind."
The story about Nut has no errors.
Your English is really improving with practice.
Jomairy works at babysitting . She has 2 babies and she is going to take a vacation in the Dominican Republic. She never met people from Thailand before. She likes going to the gym for exercise. She likes romantic and drama movies, and she loves shopping.
Laura doesn't work but she studies English hard.She is going back to Colombia in September. She likes to dance Salsa, go to the beach and go to the theater. Now,she need to has some job. She wants to go to Machupichu beach in the future.
Nut studies in Laguardia Community College. He likes to live in NY because he can go to the shows. He likes to collect sneakers and shirts. He goals is studying Computer Engineering.
The story about Jomairy is perfect.
The story about Laura has one error. The correct sentence is "Now, she needs to have a job of some kind."
The story about Nut has no errors.
Your English is really improving with practice.
Jomairy works at babysitting . She has 2 babies and she is going to take a vacation in the Dominican Republic. She never met people from Thailand before. She likes going to the gym for exercise. She likes romantic and drama movies, and she loves shopping.
Laura doesn't work but she studies English hard.She is going back to Colombia in September. She likes to dance Salsa, go to the beach and go to the theater. Now,she need to has some job. She wants to go to Machupichu beach in the future.
Nut studies in Laguardia Community College. He likes to live in NY because he can go to the shows. He likes to collect sneakers and shirts. He goals is studying Computer Engineering.
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