Tuesday, April 30, 2013

for Tida, Sasa and Christine


 Your work is mostly correct, but there are a few errors.

Christine's story:


-"on weekend" should be "on the weekend." 

-"handsome guy" should be "a handsome guy"

 

Sasa's story:


"flushing" should be "Flushing" with a capital letter. 


"many country people" should be "people from many countries"


Tida's story:

"in Roosevelt" should be "on Roosevelt Island" (or Avenue?)

 "NY" should be "N.Y."


 

Tida, Sasa, Christine

Christine worked 12 hours on weekend. She works two days a week. She intends to continue her job 1 year. She has lived in flushing for a month. She had never met handsome guy before she moved to NY. She is going to take a vacation in Taiwan maybe next year. She would like to have a good life in the future.


Sasa studied 4 hours yesterday. She studies 5 days a week. She intends to continue her studying three more months. She has lived in flushing for a month. She had never met many different country people before she moved to NY. She is going to take a vacation in Thailand next year. She would like to have a good life in the future.


Tida studied 4 hours yesterday. She studies 5 days a week. She intends to continue her studying 1 more year. She has lived in Roosevelt for a month. She had never seen a lot of shopping places before she moved to NY. She is going to take a vacation in South Korea. She would like to have a good life in the future.   

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