for Tida, Sasa and Christine
Your work is mostly correct, but there are a few errors.
Christine's story:
-"on weekend" should be "on the weekend."
-"handsome guy" should be "a handsome guy"
Sasa's story:
"flushing" should be "Flushing" with a capital letter.
"many country people" should be "people from many countries"
Tida's story:
"in Roosevelt" should be "on Roosevelt Island" (or Avenue?)
"NY" should be "N.Y."
Tida, Sasa, Christine
Christine worked 12 hours on weekend. She works two days a week. She intends to continue her job 1 year. She has lived in flushing for a month. She had never met handsome guy before she moved to NY. She is going to take a vacation in Taiwan maybe next year. She would like to have a good life in the future.Sasa studied 4 hours yesterday. She studies 5 days a week. She intends to continue her studying three more months. She has lived in flushing for a month. She had never met many different country people before she moved to NY. She is going to take a vacation in Thailand next year. She would like to have a good life in the future.
Tida studied 4 hours yesterday. She studies 5 days a week. She intends to continue her studying 1 more year. She has lived in Roosevelt for a month. She had never seen a lot of shopping places before she moved to NY. She is going to take a vacation in South Korea. She would like to have a good life in the future.
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