Tuesday, April 30, 2013

for Berta, Fernando and Elena.

Your three stories are mostly accurate.

"Forever" is one word, not two. You need "a" before "useful life" (the noun "life," not "live," which is a verb. Otherwise, the story about Berta is correct.

The story about Fernando is accurate except for one error. You should have used the noun, "life," not the verb, "live." Wait, I found another! Again, you forgot to put "a" before "useful."

The story about Elena has three errors. "studys" should be "studies." "Tree" is not a number but a green thing. Also, you should have put the article before "useful."



Berta worked ten hours yesterday. She works seven day a week. She intends to continue her job for ever. She has lived in New York for ten years. Berta had never met Russian people before she moved to New York. She is going to take vacation in Florida this summer. She would like to have useful live in the future.


Fernando worked eight hours yesterday. He works five day a week. He intends to continue his job for 3 more years. He has lived in New York for twelve years.Fernando had never met Indian  people before he moved to New York. He is going to take vacation in California this summer. He would like to have useful live in the future.

Elena worked zero hours yesterday. She study's five day a week. She intends to continue her study  for 2 years. She has lived in New York for tree years. Elena had never met Spanish people before she moved to New York. She is going to take vacation in Russia this summer. She would like to have useful live in the future.

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