for Jomairy

Thanks for your very concise introduction to your partner Anil.

I've made some changes for you to look at.

from the teacher:

Hi,
I would like to introduce you to my friend Anil.  He is from Turkey .He is 20 years old, and he wants to be an actor.

Original:

HI
I introduce you my friend ANIL he is from Turkey .He is 20 years old and he wants to be an actor