Beata Altanis
Hi,
I would like to introduce Josephine. We go together to the same saturaday class, where we learn English language. She is a very nice person. She is from Ecuador and she is already in America for about 7 years. Josephine is working in nail saloon. And also did massage.
She has a big happy family. Now, she lives with her brother in New York.
Apart from that she is interested in music, plays guitar well. Also, she likes to watch interesting films and read books.
In New York she believes that people who study, will have a future and career. That's why she is going to study, so she can get a better job. Also she wants to get married and have family. And some day come back to her country. I believe that she is going to achive all of her dreams and plans. Because as we say in my country "It's never late to learn, and to change your life for better. I happy for you that you spend your free time on persuing your goals.
I would like to introduce Josephine. We go together to the same saturaday class, where we learn English language. She is a very nice person. She is from Ecuador and she is already in America for about 7 years. Josephine is working in nail saloon. And also did massage.
She has a big happy family. Now, she lives with her brother in New York.
Apart from that she is interested in music, plays guitar well. Also, she likes to watch interesting films and read books.
In New York she believes that people who study, will have a future and career. That's why she is going to study, so she can get a better job. Also she wants to get married and have family. And some day come back to her country. I believe that she is going to achive all of her dreams and plans. Because as we say in my country "It's never late to learn, and to change your life for better. I happy for you that you spend your free time on persuing your goals.
posted by the blog at 8:09 PM
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Beata,
Let's look at a revised version of your introduction to Josephine. There are not many changes:
I would like to introduce Josephine. We go together to the same Saturday class, where we learn the English language. She is a very nice person. She is from Ecuador and she has already been in America for about 7 years. Josephine is working in a nail salon and also did massage.
She has a big happy family. Now, she lives with her brother in New York.
Apart from that, she is interested in music, plays guitar well. Also, she likes to watch interesting films and read books.
In New York she believes that people who study will have a future and career. That's why she is going to study, so she can get a better job. Also, she wants to get married,have a family and some day come back to her country. I believe that she is going to achieve all of her dreams and plans. Because as we say in my country "It's never too late to learn, and to change your life for the better." I am happy for you that you spend your free time pursuing your goals.
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