Monday, January 23, 2012

Daniela Velez

I would like to introduce you to my partner. Her name is Lina, she is from china and she is studying english to pass the TOEFL test to start college, she arrived in New  York 9 months ago. She lives in Queens near the school. Now she doesn't have a job but she wants to work in anything that she came find. She likes to read books about biology but she doesn't like to read in english because she said that it is very difficult to understand. She always reads in her own language all the books, and she said that most of the time in her life she read was when she was a teenager. She said that time the books were very easy for her but now she doesnt read often. She is now interested in other things, she likes to read fiction because it is most interesting to her,.She always is interested in news because she said that it is very important to know what happens in the world. Sometimes she reads online but not much  because she prefer books. She likes New York but not to much because she prefers to live in Florida because it is a very beautiful city and clean.

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Blogger the blog said...

Daniela, thank you for your comprehensive introduction to Lina. I have made some corrections and they are below. Please read and compare the version below with the original:

I would like to introduce you to my partner. Her name is Lina. She is from China, and she is studying English to pass the TOEFL test to start college. She arrived in New York 9 months ago. She lives in Queens near the school. Now she doesn't have a job, but she wants to work at anything that she came find.

She likes to read books about biology, but she doesn't like to read in English because she said that it is very difficult to understand. She always reads in her own language all the books, and she said that the time in her life when she read the most was when she was a teenager. She said that time the books were very easy for her, but now she doesn't read often. She is now interested in other things. She likes to read fiction because it is the most interesting to her. She always is interested in news because she said that it is very important to know what happens in the world. Sometimes she reads online but not much because she prefers books.

She likes New York but not too much. She prefers to live in Florida because it is a very beautiful city and clean.

Mon Jan 23, 07:26:00 PM  
Anonymous Saruca said...

I agree this is a very comprehensive and detailed introduction. I liked it very much.
I would just advise Lina to keep on reading more books in English since she wants to attend to the College here in the US. Thanks.

Tue Jan 24, 03:01:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

milagros

lina try to read in english more often so it wouldn't be too hard to under stand.

Wed Jan 25, 10:19:00 PM  

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