Ivan4
I would like to introduce you to my partner Jorge. His from Guayaquil Ecuador.his 23 years old,and he came to New YORK five years ago ,he would like to take business administration carrer to get good money in the future and buy a home just for his selft, and also because he has all family here.he has two brothers and two sisters,he most play paintball and soccer in flushing park with his brothers.
He's already married he has a a son.Hes going back to Euador next year with all his family to get fun and visit diferents place like Galapagos and take a lot pictures of kinds,spicies of animals.also he wants to go Azogues to visit a famous church..
He's already married he has a a son.Hes going back to Euador next year with all his family to get fun and visit diferents place like Galapagos and take a lot pictures of kinds,spicies of animals.also he wants to go Azogues to visit a famous church..
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Ivan,
This is the introduction you wrote with a few corrections:
I would like to introduce you to my partner Jorge. He is from Guayaquil, Ecuador. He is 23 years old,and he came to New YORK five years ago. He he would like to take a business administration career to get good money in the future and buy a home just for himself, and also because he has his whole family here. He has two brothers and two sisters. He mostly plays paintball and soccer in Flushing park with his brothers.
He's already married, and he has a a son. He's going back to Ecuador next year with all his family to get fun and visit differents places like Galapagos and take a lot pictures of species of animals. Also, he wants to go Azogues to visit a famous church..
There's one correction I forgot:
"differents places" is incorrect. The correct way is "different places." In English, adjectives (like different) are never plural. Even if the noun after them is plural, they stay singular.
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