I would like to introduce my partner, Ivan , who is from Azogues, Ecuador and is 22 years old. Ivan has been here since 2009 and he would like to study computer scince at LaGuardia , he likes to play soccer when he doesnt have to work also he wants to go to Ecuador visit his family.
he has a job but he's not really happy , Ivan wants to work at wall street and make a real good money so he can buy a ferrari and take out his girlfriend because she dont like the train.
he has a job but he's not really happy , Ivan wants to work at wall street and make a real good money so he can buy a ferrari and take out his girlfriend because she dont like the train.
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Jorge,
This is your message, with a few corrections. My advice to you is to be careful about capital letters and periods. Sometimes you put commas when there should be a period:
I would like to introduce my partner, Ivan , who is from Azogues, Ecuador and is 22 years old. Ivan has been here since 2009 and he would like to study computer science at LaGuardia. He likes to play soccer when he does'nt have to work also he wants to go to Ecuador to visit his family.
He has a job but he's not really happy. Ivan wants to work at Wall Street and make real good money so he can buy a Ferrari and take out his girlfriend because she doesn't like the train.
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