Abu Parvez
Hi how are you, i am fine,
I would like to introduce my partners, named Ms. Tereza and Mr. Dariusz. First i introduce you to Ms. Tereza, she is visiting here to America for four months from Brazil and living in Long Island, New York with her daughter because her daughter got a new baby just one month ago, she is retired banker and worked in Administration Department. Her husband is a teacher of University Federal of Vale Jequitinhonha And Mucuri (UFVJM), in MINAS GERAIS, Brazil. She has tow son and one daughter. Her oldest son is living in Colorado, USA and the youngest one is living in Brazil with her, both of them are married. She already visited Coloraro in July. She likes New York very much.
Now i introduce Mr. Dariusz, he is from Poland 18 years ago. He lives in Maspath, New York and worked as a cabinetmaker in Mespath. He is married, and he has one son and one daughter. In general he likes New York.
with best regards
Abu Parvez
I would like to introduce my partners, named Ms. Tereza and Mr. Dariusz. First i introduce you to Ms. Tereza, she is visiting here to America for four months from Brazil and living in Long Island, New York with her daughter because her daughter got a new baby just one month ago, she is retired banker and worked in Administration Department. Her husband is a teacher of University Federal of Vale Jequitinhonha And Mucuri (UFVJM), in MINAS GERAIS, Brazil. She has tow son and one daughter. Her oldest son is living in Colorado, USA and the youngest one is living in Brazil with her, both of them are married. She already visited Coloraro in July. She likes New York very much.
Now i introduce Mr. Dariusz, he is from Poland 18 years ago. He lives in Maspath, New York and worked as a cabinetmaker in Mespath. He is married, and he has one son and one daughter. In general he likes New York.
with best regards
Abu Parvez
posted by the blog at 3:02 PM
1 Comments:
Abu,
This is a copy of your writing, with some changes. Please look at words and spelling that are different and at the punctuation (commas and periods):
One point: Ms. and Mr. come before family names, not first names. We can say Mr. Parvez but not Mr. Abu. You can call me Kevin but not Mr. Kevin.
I would like to introduce my partners, named Tereza and Dariusz. First, I will introduce you to Ms. Tereza. She is visiting America for four months from Brazil and living in Long Island, New York with her daughter because her daughter got a new baby just one month ago. She is a retired banker and worked in the Administration Department. Her husband is a teacher of the University Federal of Vale Jequitinhonha And Mucuri (UFVJM), in Minas Gerais, Brazil. She has two sons and one daughter. Her oldest son is living in Colorado, U.S.A. and the youngest one is living in Brazil with her. Both of them are married. She already visited Colorado in July. She likes New York very much.
Now I will introduce Mr. Dariusz. He is from Poland and came here 18 years ago. He lives in Maspeth, New York and works as a cabinetmaker in Maspeth. He is married, and he has one son and one daughter. In general, he likes New York.
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