Eduardo Quadra
Hello new friends,
My name is Eduardo and I would like to introduce Patricia Elizabeth.
Patricia is from Honduras, her hometown is San Pedro Sula.
She was born and lived in San Pedro Sula, where she worked as secretary. In her hometown, Patricia started to study to be a journalist, unfortunately she didn't finish the class, she studied journalism two years and she left the university to come to United States.
In the first Year in US Patricia lived in Florida, where she worked in a big hotel as housekeeper. After one year she decided to move to New York City, because she had sure that here people has more opportunities, to study and as well to find a good job.
Patricia is married. She and her Husband live in New York for four years. They have two children, a boy age eleven and a girl age fourteen, but unfortunately at this moment their kids are living in San Pedro Sula, Patricia and her husband named Franklin really miss them and they have plan to bring them to New York as soon as possible.
First of all the couple had plans to stay here during one year, but they change their mind because both are working and could have a better life in New York City. Patricia believe that here she is getting improve her English as well she will find a better job to remain in the city with her husband and her children soon.
She really enjoys New York and she is having a happy time although she misses the family and the friends. About the LaGuardia she wants to improve her English skills.
My name is Eduardo and I would like to introduce Patricia Elizabeth.
Patricia is from Honduras, her hometown is San Pedro Sula.
She was born and lived in San Pedro Sula, where she worked as secretary. In her hometown, Patricia started to study to be a journalist, unfortunately she didn't finish the class, she studied journalism two years and she left the university to come to United States.
In the first Year in US Patricia lived in Florida, where she worked in a big hotel as housekeeper. After one year she decided to move to New York City, because she had sure that here people has more opportunities, to study and as well to find a good job.
Patricia is married. She and her Husband live in New York for four years. They have two children, a boy age eleven and a girl age fourteen, but unfortunately at this moment their kids are living in San Pedro Sula, Patricia and her husband named Franklin really miss them and they have plan to bring them to New York as soon as possible.
First of all the couple had plans to stay here during one year, but they change their mind because both are working and could have a better life in New York City. Patricia believe that here she is getting improve her English as well she will find a better job to remain in the city with her husband and her children soon.
She really enjoys New York and she is having a happy time although she misses the family and the friends. About the LaGuardia she wants to improve her English skills.
posted by the blog at 4:30 PM
1 Comments:
Eduardo,
Thanks for posting Patricia Elizabeth's introduction.
This is a version with some corrections. Most of the changes are in punctuation, but there are also some changes in word order. I suggest you compare this version (below) and the original (above).
Hello new friends,
My name is Eduardo and I would like to introduce Patricia Elizabeth.
Patricia is from Honduras. Her hometown is San Pedro Sula.
She was born and lived in San Pedro Sula, where she worked as secretary. In her hometown, Patricia started to study to be a journalist. Unfortunately, she didn't finish the class. She studied journalism two years and she left the university to come to the United States.
In the first Year in the U.S., Patricia lived in Florida, where she worked in a big hotel as housekeeper. After one year, she decided to move to New York City, because she was sure that here people have more opportunities, to study and as well to find a good job.
Patricia is married. She and her husband have lived in New York for four years. They have two children, a boy age eleven and a girl age fourteen, but unfortunately at this moment their kids are living in San Pedro Sula. Patricia and her husband named Franklin really miss them and they have a plan to bring them to New York as soon as possible.
First of all, the couple had plans to stay here for one year, but they changed their mind because both are working and could have a better life in New York City. Patricia believes that here she is getting improvement in her English and she will soon find a better job as well to remain in the city with her husband and her children.
She really enjoys New York and she is having a happy time although she misses the family and the friends. About LaGuardia, she wants to improve her English skills.
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