Saturday, July 23, 2011

MY FRIEND ALINA

She has been in NEW YORK since 1980.
she was over 40 a few years ago she has worked
as a cleaning lady, one day  she decided to go school
somebody told her she had to get haghier education.

She needs some tha only course  she took was a
bookkepper class.
Right now she is a manager in finance , she is nice person.

JOSEFINA CHAUCA

2 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Josefina,

This is the correction of your writing:

She has been in New York since 1980.
she was over 40 a few years ago. She has worked
as a cleaning lady. One day she decided to go to school
Somebody told her she had to get higher education.She needs some. the only course she took was a
bookkeeper class.
Right now she is a manager in finance. She is a nice person.

Sat Jul 23, 10:07:00 PM  
Blogger the blog said...

I understand the meaning now. The correct sentence is this: Somebody told her she had higher education.

She already had higher education, so she should go back to school. I got it now!

Sat Jul 23, 10:13:00 PM  

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