"The Great Story About Erick Mareno" by Karina Bitar
He has been living in NY for 10 years. Before he came here, he had been living in Bolivia for twenty two years.
Now he works in a parking garage. He studies English at La Guardia Community College and he usually plays video games, listens to music and sees movie.
When he arrived, he saw the terrorist attack at the World Trade Center on 9-11. He told us this story,
Now he works in a parking garage. He studies English at La Guardia Community College and he usually plays video games, listens to music and sees movie.
When he arrived, he saw the terrorist attack at the World Trade Center on 9-11. He told us this story,
posted by the blog at 6:49 PM
2 Comments:
Karina,
This is the correction of your writing. There is only one correction (one letter you forgot. It is the letter "s." Can you find it?
He has been living in NY for 10 years. Before he came here, he had been living in Bolivia for twenty two years.
Now he works in a parking garage. He studies English at LaGuardia Community College and he usually plays video games, listens to music and sees movies.
When he arrived, he saw the terrorist attack at the World Trade Center on 9-11. He told us this story.
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