Summary of the diabetes article_JUNG WOO KOO
Diabetes in the USA has been rising sharply because Americans are
eating more fast food and getting less excercise. In conclusion,
American diabetics could rise more radically unlike before.
eating more fast food and getting less excercise. In conclusion,
American diabetics could rise more radically unlike before.
posted by the blog at 11:52 PM
2 Comments:
Jung Woo,
That's a fine summary. The only improvement I can suggest is a comma between "radically" and "unlike."
Thank you for your help!
Sir!
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