My classmate andres lives and works in New York.
He has been here for eight years.
He plants to stay in New York a long time.
He worries every day about problems in New York his family.
Last year he and his family went to equadore for vacation .
Before he came to lived in equadore.
His goal is to finish his college then he make good Carrier.
If he were Obama , he would make more work facility.
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correction:
If he were Obama , he would make more work facility.
-If he were Obama, he would make more work facilities ("more" comes before a plural noun)
He has been here for eight years.
He plants to stay in New York a long time.
He worries every day about problems in New York his family.
Last year he and his family went to equadore for vacation .
Before he came to lived in equadore.
His goal is to finish his college then he make good Carrier.
If he were Obama , he would make more work facility.
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correction:
My classmate andres lives and works in New York.
-My classmate Andres lives in works in New York.
He has been here for eight years. (correct)
He plants to stay in New York a long time.
-He plans to stay in New York a long time.
He worries every day about problems in New York his family.
-He worries every day about problems in New York involving his family.
Last year he and his family went to equadore for vacation .
(Ecuador should be begin with a capital letter)
Before he came to lived in equadore.
-Before he came to New York, he had lived in Ecuador.
His goal is to finish his college then he make good Carrier.
-His goal is to finish his college, then to make a good career.
-If he were Obama, he would make more work facilities ("more" comes before a plural noun)
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