Myriam

My partner, Rouf , a 30 year old single man who lives alone works as a citywork and speaks Bengaly,the language of his country, Bangladesh,which is on the continent of Asia,and in his hometown,Daka, which has a population of one million.He has been in New York for 7 years and feels happy here


Myriam,

This is mostly correct. I see a few minor problems.

1. "a citywork" should be "a city worker."

2. You should check the spelling ("A, B, C" menu above), and if you can't find it there try "google." The spelling of the language of Bangladesh is "Bengali," and the spelling of the capital is Dhaka."

3. Be careful of spacing commas (,). There should be no space before a comma and one space after it.

Incorrect: "hometown,Dhaka."

Incorrect: "hometown ,Dhaka"

Incorrect: "hometown , Dhaka"

Correct:  "hometown, Dhaka."

That's a small thing but you should start making a habit of correct pronunciation now. It will help you in the future.