for Freddy Salinas and Josef Christ

Freddy and Josef, 

 

Below there is correction of your writing ("from the teacher") and your original writing. You should look at the differences. 

 

from the teacher:

 What about Barack Obama President?...

He was born in Hawaii in 1961. His father was a black African man and his mother was a white American woman. He lived in Hawaii when he was a child. After 4 years, his parents divorced.

His mother got married to an Indonesian man. They moved to Indonesia in 1967, and when he was ten years old he returned to Hawaii with his family.

Obama majored in political science and international relations at Columbia University. After four years, he moved to Chicago. From 1985 to 1986 he was director of a community project because he liked it.
       
He was the first black president of the Harvard law review, and he was a teacher in the University of Chicago Law School for twelve years.

In 1996 he was elected senator for Illinois, and in 2004 he become at U.S. senator, but in 2008 he was elected president of the USA, Obama now is the first black president.

 

 

 

original:

What about Barack Obama President?...
He born on Hawaii in 1961, his father his a black African man and his mother is a white American woman, he lived in Hawaii when he was a child, after 4 years his parents divorced.
       His mother got married whit a Indonesian man, they move to Indonesia in 1967, when he was ten years old he return to Hawaii whit his family.
       Obama mayor on political science and international relations at Columbia University, after four years old he move to Chicago. From 1985 to 1986 he was director of the Community projector because he like it.
        He was the first black president of the Harvard law review, He was a teacher in the University of Chicago Law school during twelve years.
        In 1996 he was elected senator for Illinois, in 2004 he become at USA senator, but in 2008 he was elected president of the USA, Obama now is the first black president.