Yudelfy Ureña - What do you think about adoption?
What do you think about adoption?
In my personal opinion the adoption is very good for both, the child and the couples. first, is good for the couples because some of then can not have children biologically, and the adoption given the opportunity to realize their dreams of parenthood. that is mean, they want to be good example for the child, and give him the best they can do. Is good for the child, because give the opportunity to grow up in a good place with someone how can take care of her/him, maybe good education, and a possibility to have nice future.
by Yudelfy Ureña
In my personal opinion the adoption is very good for both, the child and the couples. first, is good for the couples because some of then can not have children biologically, and the adoption given the opportunity to realize their dreams of parenthood. that is mean, they want to be good example for the child, and give him the best they can do. Is good for the child, because give the opportunity to grow up in a good place with someone how can take care of her/him, maybe good education, and a possibility to have nice future.
by Yudelfy Ureña
posted by the blog at 4:09 AM
2 Comments:
Yudelfy,
We appreciate your original response. Below there is a correction and a comment:
In my personal opinion the adoption is very good for both the child and the couples. First, it is good for the couples because some of then can not have children biologically, and adoption gives the opportunity to realize their dreams of parenthood. That means they want to be good examples for the child and give him the best they can do. It is good for the child, because it gives the opportunity to grow up in a good place with someone who can take care of her/him, maybe provide a good education, and a possibility to have nice future.
Comment: You've expressed your ideas succinctly and clearly. You have provided convincing support for your opinions. The reader is persuaded.
mistake in my correction:
"some of then" should be "some of them"
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