Karynastory by Erick
Karyna was born in Colombia. She has been livimg in New York for six months , she has been studying at LGCC. since January and now she is in 4 th level , she is married and like. the stoy to will be continue.
posted by the blog at 6:58 PM
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Erick,
The grammar here is good (last sentence needed a repair). The errors are punctuation. This is the correction:
Karyna was born in Colombia. She has been living in New York for six months. She has been studying at LGCC since January and now she is in the 4th level. She is married and would like the story to continue.
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