Erick story life by :Esa hasan
Erick was born in a nice country.Its name Bolivia. He has been living in New York City for ten years and he had been in Bolivia for twinty three years before he came here.Then he worked in a factory in Manhattan for one year but he swiched his work to parking garage man.
Erick has started to study English language at Leguardia college.His hobbies are seeing movies,listening to music, playing soccer and plaiyng vidio games.
Erick has started to study English language at Leguardia college.His hobbies are seeing movies,listening to music, playing soccer and plaiyng vidio games.
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1 Comments:
Esa,
This is the correction to your writing:
Erick was born in a nice country. Its name Bolivia. He has been living in New York City for ten years, and he had been in Bolivia for twenty three years before he came here. Then he worked in a factory in Manhattan for one year but he switched his work to parking garage man.
Erick has started to study English language at Laguardia college. His hobbies are seeing movies,listening to music, playing soccer and playing video games.
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