JUNG WOO KOO
In Hanzo, a president is elected once every five years. The president can
be re-elected one times. If The law is broken by a president, he or her from
office can't be removed by people. In the history of Hanzo, many presidents
from office have been removed by people, despite many more having broken laws.
The industries that most people are employed in in Hanzo are lumber and candy. A lot of sweeties are produced by the country. Candy is exported to North of Korea and onion is imported to U.S. In Hanzo, English is spoken by
most people, but Korean and Chinese are also spoken.
For lunch eggs are usually eaten by resident of Hanzo. On the other hand,
raw fish is prefered for dinner. In Hanzo, peole are concerned by the Superman and Batman. During dinner, their culture and history are often discussed by families.
be re-elected one times. If The law is broken by a president, he or her from
office can't be removed by people. In the history of Hanzo, many presidents
from office have been removed by people, despite many more having broken laws.
The industries that most people are employed in in Hanzo are lumber and candy. A lot of sweeties are produced by the country. Candy is exported to North of Korea and onion is imported to U.S. In Hanzo, English is spoken by
most people, but Korean and Chinese are also spoken.
For lunch eggs are usually eaten by resident of Hanzo. On the other hand,
raw fish is prefered for dinner. In Hanzo, peole are concerned by the Superman and Batman. During dinner, their culture and history are often discussed by families.
posted by the blog at 3:15 AM
2 Comments:
Jung Woo,
You obviously know the passive voice well. Please be aware, though, that it is used differently from Korean passive voice (at least, I think so. I don't know Korean!)
corrections (minor ones):
-one times- one time
-sweeties- sweets
-onion is- onions are
-for lunch eggs- for lunch, eggs
-resident- residents
-by the Superman- by Superman
I alway thank you for your advice!
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