Passive_Songmin
A president is elected in the United States by people once every 4 years.
The president can be re-elected by them 1 time.
If the law is broken by a president, he or her can be removed by people from office.
In the history of the United States, 1 president has been removed by the people from office, despite many more laws having been broken.
The industries that most people are employed in in the United States are agriculture and arms industry.
A lot of boats are produced in the country.
Weapon is exported to the United Arab Emirates and semiconductor is imported from Korea by the United States.
English is spoken by most people in the United States,but Spanish and French is also spoken by them a lot.
Hamburger is usually eaten for lunch by residents of the United States.
On the oter hand, steak is prefered for dinner by them.
people is concerned about politics and economy in the United States.
During dinner, neighbors and health is often discussed by families.
The president can be re-elected by them 1 time.
If the law is broken by a president, he or her can be removed by people from office.
In the history of the United States, 1 president has been removed by the people from office, despite many more laws having been broken.
The industries that most people are employed in in the United States are agriculture and arms industry.
A lot of boats are produced in the country.
Weapon is exported to the United Arab Emirates and semiconductor is imported from Korea by the United States.
English is spoken by most people in the United States,but Spanish and French is also spoken by them a lot.
Hamburger is usually eaten for lunch by residents of the United States.
On the oter hand, steak is prefered for dinner by them.
people is concerned about politics and economy in the United States.
During dinner, neighbors and health is often discussed by families.
posted by the blog at 3:46 AM
2 Comments:
Songmin,
Excellent work! There are a few minor errors, none involving the passive voice, which you obviously know how to use effectively.
- he or her (he or she)
- arms industry (the arms industry)
-weapon is (weapons are)
-semiconductor is (semiconductors are)
-Spanish and French is (are)
-Hamburger is (Hamburgers are)"Hamburger" can be uncountable, but in this case it is countable because you are talking about the things not the ingredient
-people is concerned (are)
-neighbors and health is (are)
As I said, the errors are minor. It is easy to miss easy things when you are working on more difficult ones. The excellence is undiminished.
Thank you for your comment.
It is very helpful for me:)
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