Corruption in my country _Marika
Corruption is declining in throughout my country,Japan,but increasing from fifteen to twenty-four years old people.An expert said,a salary is not different between a regular employee and a part-time job at first,so young people get part-time job easily and they don't think about their future seriously.And then they can't improve their skill and can't get a more salary than at a first salary.As a result, they can't get a regular occupation.
posted by the blog at 1:36 AM
1 Comments:
Marika,
Yes, there is now a problematic division between regular employees and temporary or part-time workers in Japan. It is also a problem in the United States. Companies save money by not hiring workers full-time. They don't have to take responsibility for part-time workers. The gap between the two kinds of workers creates social problems.
Your paragraph had three small mistakes:
-there should not be a comma after "an expert said"
-in "get part time job," job should be plural.
-there is no "a" before "more salary"
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