Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Passive Voice by Arm@ndo

A President is elected 1 every 4 years by people in the U.S.
The President can be re-elected 2 times by them.
If a President is broken the law, him/her can/can't removed by the people.
In the history of U.S, one president has been removed from the office by them, despite many more having been broken laws.
The industries that employ in the U.S. are Construction and Business.
A lot of corns are produced by the country. Cars are exported to South America and Oil is imported from Venezuela and Ecuador.
English is spoken in the U.S. by mots people,Spanish and Chines are spoken a lot also.
Sandwiches ususally are eaten in the U.S. by the residents for lunch. On the other hand they have prefered salad for dinner.
People in the U.S. have concerned the economic and jobs during dinner, Wheather and education are often discussed by families in the U.S.

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Armando,

That's good. You understand well how to use the passive voice. Your knowledge of English grammar gives you a strong foundation. I'm using your example as the model for correction for other students:

Corrected version:

A President is elected once every 4 years by people in the U.S.
The President can be re-elected 2 times by them.If a law is broken by a president, he or she can be removed by the people.In the history of U.S, one president has been removed from the office by them, despite many more laws having been broken.

The industries that most people are employed in in the U.S. are construction and business.
A lot of corn is produced by the country. Cars are exported to South America and oil is imported from Venezuela and Ecuador.
English is spoken in the U.S. by most people,and Spanish and Chinese are spoken a lot also.

Sandwiches are usually eaten in the U.S. by the residents for lunch. On the other hand, salad is preferred for dinner.

People in the U.S. are concerned about the economy and jobs. During dinner, the weather and education are often discussed by families in the U.S.

Wed May 18, 07:07:00 PM  

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