Monday, May 17, 2010

"About The Hilton High School" by Lady Palma

There were a lot of foreign students whose were going to he Hilton high school in suburban Virginia. They came from different countries like Peru, Guatemala, Honduras, Pakistan, China, etc. The school had ESOL Program. The director of the school said: "They are inmigrants, they are here, so they need to be tought.

ESOL Program is more difficult at the begging, but it is gettin easy. It has advantages and disadvantages. Advantages are learning new information about new languages, culture and history. Their teachers try to teach as much as their can.
Disadvantages are: it is hard to understand new vocabulary because they can take more class about ESOL.

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Lady, this is the correction of your summary:

There were a lot of foreign students who were going to the Hilton high school in suburban Virginia. They came from different countries like Peru, Guatemala, Honduras, Pakistan, China, etc. The school had an ESOL Program. The director of the school said, "They are inmigrants, they are here, so they need to be taught."

The ESOL Program is more difficult at the beginning, but it gets easier. It has advantages and disadvantages. Advantages are learning new information about new languages, culture and history. Their teachers try to teach as much as they can.
Disadvantages are that it is hard to understand new vocabulary.

I cut the end of the sentence because the meaning wasn't clear: (because they can take more classes in ESOL).

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