My Partner
Her name is Lady Palma,and she is from Colombia.She have two brother,her parents and brother lived in Colombia.Now she have been in New York for one month.She live with her uncle, aunt and cousin.They had two pets on cat,and on dog.
She like listening to music and chatting with her friends and her boyfriend because.She came to New York because she want learn and practice English.Before she went to the university in Colombia.She studied International Business for five years.
she like New York ,because there are many beautiful building and alot people from different country.She favorite color is brown.She think to study English here for one year,then go back to Colombia.she miss her family and her boyfriend so mach.
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This is a correction of your introduction of Lady Palma (You should pay attention to verb tenses, past tense and present tense):
Her name is Lady Palma,and she is from Colombia.She has two brothers,her parents and brother, who live in Colombia. Now she has been in New York for one month.She lives with her uncle, aunt and cousin.They have two pets one cat and one dog.
She likes listening to music and chatting with her friends and her boyfriend. She came to New York because she wants to learn and practice English.Before coming here, she went to the university in Colombia. She studied International Business for five years.
She likes New York because there are many beautiful buildings and a lot of people from different countries.Her favorite color is brown.She intends to study English here for one year,then go back to Colombia.she misses her family and her boyfriend so much.
She like listening to music and chatting with her friends and her boyfriend because.She came to New York because she want learn and practice English.Before she went to the university in Colombia.She studied International Business for five years.
she like New York ,because there are many beautiful building and alot people from different country.She favorite color is brown.She think to study English here for one year,then go back to Colombia.she miss her family and her boyfriend so mach.
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This is a correction of your introduction of Lady Palma (You should pay attention to verb tenses, past tense and present tense):
Her name is Lady Palma,and she is from Colombia.She has two brothers,her parents and brother, who live in Colombia. Now she has been in New York for one month.She lives with her uncle, aunt and cousin.They have two pets one cat and one dog.
She likes listening to music and chatting with her friends and her boyfriend. She came to New York because she wants to learn and practice English.Before coming here, she went to the university in Colombia. She studied International Business for five years.
She likes New York because there are many beautiful buildings and a lot of people from different countries.Her favorite color is brown.She intends to study English here for one year,then go back to Colombia.she misses her family and her boyfriend so much.
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