Saturday, April 17, 2010

Luz

My partner name is Milagros. She has lived in N.Y. since 20 years ago. She lives with her family. She is Peruvian. Milagros has 2 daughters.She is an assistant teacher and wants to be a teacher. She studies English to be better and continue studying for her dream,have a career and be better.

Luz,

Please look at the corrections to your writing. There are some changes in grammar and spelling and punctuation.

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