Ana Adames

Juan Carlos Rodriquez is a good partner. He was born in Cuba and lives in Manhattan with his wife. They have lived here for about 2 years. He is very happy. He likes N.Y. Juan Carlos works in an architecture Company. He likes he job. He works with his wife. They usually go somewhere together. In the future he wants to pas the exam for a license and get a better job.


Ana,

Please take a look at the changes I have made to your writing. I recommend you copy it in your notebook for practice.