BECKY
My partner is Reina. She is from cuba. She wants to improve to make better. All of her family is in Cuba. Her husband came with her.
She is interested in having fun. She is working in an office of an architect .she doesn`t plan to do a different kind of work in the future because she likes architecture.She been in new york for two years and she loves New York.
Her educational plan is to study design arts but now she wants to learn more English.
Becky,
Most of your mistakes were punctuation. The grammar is fundamentally correct. Please check and copy this.
She is interested in having fun. She is working in an office of an architect .she doesn`t plan to do a different kind of work in the future because she likes architecture.She been in new york for two years and she loves New York.
Her educational plan is to study design arts but now she wants to learn more English.
Becky,
Most of your mistakes were punctuation. The grammar is fundamentally correct. Please check and copy this.
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