Sunday, February 01, 2015

Mr. Alfredo came from Mexico city twenty years ago, he was emigrant
his first job was in the farm he picked cotton, tomatoes and cantaloupes but Mr Alfredo now he is neurosurgeon and professor at johns Hopkins University, he is looking for a breakthrough in the treatment of brain cancer.
The first job in his life was fathers 

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Mr. Alfredo came from Mexico city twenty years ago. He was an immigrant. His first job was on a farm where he picked cotton, tomatoes and cantaloupes, but Mr Alfredo now is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins University. He is looking for a breakthrough in the treatment of brain cancer.

The first job in his life was at his father's gas station. 



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