Sunday, February 01, 2015

Mr Alfredo came from Mexico city twenty years ago, he was a emigrant,
his first job was in the farm he picked cotton,tomatoes and cantaloupes but Mr Alfred now he is neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins university he is looking for breakthrough in the treatment of the brain cancer.
The first job in his life was in the gas station


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Mr Alfredo came from Mexico City twenty years ago. He was an immigrant. His first job was on a farm, where he picked cotton, tomatoes and cantaloupes, but now he is a neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkins university. He is looking for a breakthrough in the treatment of  brain cancer.

The first job in his life was at a gas station.

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