Sunday, February 01, 2015

January 31 2015. Diana and Soren.

about Alfredo's story.

He was born in Mexico, and small town. His family was really poor.
In 1970 was a economic collapse,and he encouraged for go out to Mexico for getting money.
Alfredo decided to go to United states when he was 18 years.
He crossed the border, but the first time he had to come back to Mexico.
Like latin people, he was perseverance and he did again and he crossed.
He fisrt job like elegaly was in a farm, picking cotton, tomates and something else.
Alfredo bought a camper for live, and he said that was expensive and he learnt that some people can take advantage on other. 
He moved the other place and he got the papers like citizen and he start about his life, and his cousin encourage to do something different to pick cotton and tomates.
He got a new job in a fishes market, washing and clean it, this job let him to take English class at nights.
He finish his college, and he started to study on a scholarship,and his teachers encourage him to study medicine in Harvard and he did it.

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Alfredo was born in Mexico in a small town. His family was really poor. In the 1970s, there was an economic collapse, and he was encouraged to go out of Mexico to get money.

Alfredo decided to go to the United states when he was 18 years old. He crossed the border, but the first time he had to come back to Mexico. Like Latin people, he had perseverance, and he did it again and crossed successfully.

He first job was illegal, as a worker on a farm, picking cotton, tomates and some other things. Alfredo bought a camper to live in, and he said that was expensive and he learnt that some people can take advantage of others.

He moved to another place and he got citizenship papers,  and he started his life. His cousin encouraged him to do something different than picking cotton and tomatoes.

He got a new job in a fish market, washing and cleaning them. This job let him take English class at nights.

He finished his college and started to study on a scholarship. His teachers encouraged him to study medicine at Harvard, and he did it.




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